Sunday, January 22, 2006

You

Missing 2 stanzas

Your presence is like
Sunshine on a cold winter day
But more so like a
Brook that turned a desert’s way

Your name is music to my ears
Your voice a symphony
Your sight is a vision of heaven
Your countenance a masterpiece

Many beaus you have
A few pursuers I do
Will I be the one
You decide to choose

Poem from my high school years

1 Comments:

Blogger navrina said...

"but more like so a
brook that turned desert's way"...
This sentence is so amazing ...the more I read it, the more impact it has....I can somehow relate it to "road not taken"...its all about choices and here the stream chooses to go to desert-- so hopeful !wow ! SHE really must be a special person ;-), whose presence is so powerfully "hopeful"...

Good job, Minto !

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